Feedback From Treatment

The feedback we received was;

• To make the plot clearer to understand with a more detailed summary of what we want to do and achieve as people were finding it difficult to understand what our plot was.
• They also made a suggestion that we should use more props to reinforce the idea that they are camping and for it look more realistic therefore more believable to the people that will be watching.
• They said that they feel that It can actually be believable as long as we show it in our short film clearly as otherwise it may be quite confusing for the audience.